Tableau Public Link

This is my first tableau dashboard public link, I’m looking for some constructive feedback on a Tableau visualization I’ve been working on. 

• "Does the main takeaway come across clearly at first glance?”
• “Which part of the visualization feels confusing or distracting?”
• “Am I using too many (or too few) chart types to tell this story?”
• "Do the visual elements feel balanced, or does something dominate too much?”
• “Am I representing the scale of the data fairly, without distortion?”

public.tableau.com